Today, I shall try some haiku.
For more information, this site is helpful to adults and this one for kids which gives you this mnemonic for the structure:
I am first with five
Then seven in the middle --
Five again to end.
My efforts (not all respecting the 5, 7, 5 rule):
A grim gray wintery day
Walk the dog?
OK.
Woodpecker peeks
'round leaf-bare birch
seeking frozen suet.
January thaw:
Icicles -- Winter's claws! -- drip
Harmless water now.
Black-capped chickadees
cry, swoop, alight, feed, and flee --
skier's wintry friends
Paw prints in the snow
Careful steps in same imprint - -
Let's guess who was here.
Icy roads slip, slide
past homes warmly yellow-lit
in Evening Blue.
Our gay Christmas tree,
shed of her glory, must wait
boxed until next year.
Making haiku's fun!
Challenge? No rhyme, no meter
Just 5, 7 and 5.
1 comment:
Very nice haiku
If not quite conventional
Creatures, cold, and snow
:D
I liked it a lot!
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